"A spring wind' song."
#1
What you sing, a wind,
In my an empty heart?
Whose voice laughs and cries
Inside your invisible streams?
Keep silence.
I know an answer.
A taste of wormwood honey
On my lips ...
The taste of betrayed love.

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#2
sad and deep
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i like the emotion it carries RY

thanks for the read.
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#3
Needs just a bit of grammar polish, but this is incredibly haunting
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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