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Verbavore Offline
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#1
04-08-2011, 12:02 PM
THE entRancE to sAnity LieS In The trUth AbouT the exIstence Of beiNg In contact with SuperHero Incognito DiviDEd parts of the oNeness
"If you let the sound you guide, grate sour on your soul,
you pass right back your parking pass, and drive right past your goal." from Life: the Utmost Clarity
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billy Offline
Are you alluding to me?
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#2
04-08-2011, 01:04 PM
i spent ages trying to work out if the caps were a code or not
i saw nothing but the poem, which i liked
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#3
04-08-2011, 01:54 PM
The caps are intentional. Look again.
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04-08-2011, 04:26 PM
my head must have been hidden Smile
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#5
04-08-2011, 07:48 PM
Yep!

"There are lies ..." ! Am I great? Yes! I am! Ha-ha!
Cool! I mean your work!
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#6
04-09-2011, 12:41 AM
Real Situations Hidden....

interesting piece. Unique.

Sue
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#7
04-09-2011, 02:31 PM
Nice experimental piece. I didn't find the hidden message to be particularly revelatory, but it was still an interesting use of the format Smile
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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