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Truth

Truth
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#1
04-09-2011, 01:33 AM
Truth

Creeping silently within the shadows
Afraid of what I might find
Yet unable to turn back
Seeking out the truth
Knowing it is within
Wishing it wasn't
You.
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billy Offline
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#2
04-09-2011, 05:46 AM
nice form sue.
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#3
04-09-2011, 08:37 AM
Loved it!
Thank you for another good read.
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#4
04-09-2011, 11:26 AM
An interesting, unique structure with haunting Gothic overtones about each line. Nice work.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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#5
04-09-2011, 11:06 PM
Hi!
Short and wonderful!
So much in so little!
Brilliant writing!
R.Y.
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