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"Daybreak. Lust."

"Daybreak. Lust."
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#1
04-03-2011, 01:01 AM
A light and a darkness
Intertwine in lust -
A fabulous act
Of a new day creation.

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#2
04-03-2011, 02:42 AM
nicely done

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04-03-2011, 02:53 AM
Thank you. Billy!
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04-08-2011, 11:56 AM
It has a serene feel to it.
"If you let the sound you guide, grate sour on your soul,
you pass right back your parking pass, and drive right past your goal." from Life: the Utmost Clarity
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#5
04-08-2011, 07:42 PM
Hi!
Thank you!
My work allows me admire daybreak two or three times by week, Ha-ha! Usually they are so beautiful! I mean daybreaks, not work! Ha-ha!
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