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Bad Luck Bitch

Bad Luck Bitch
billy Offline
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#1
04-02-2011, 06:46 PM
i avoid the alligator
by not stepping on cracks
best if you keep your legs
closed tonight darling.
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#2
04-03-2011, 12:03 AM
Very witty and funny!
R.Y.
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#3
04-08-2011, 11:54 AM
What the... out of left field! I didn't expect that ending. But, it's got merit! (ironic as it may be...)
"If you let the sound you guide, grate sour on your soul,
you pass right back your parking pass, and drive right past your goal." from Life: the Utmost Clarity
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#4
04-14-2011, 11:48 AM
thanks guys.
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