(content warning) The Armchair Vigilante

[heslopian]

[youtube]sxH39HZKJpQ[/youtube]

[billy]

the way you say the c word with a seemingly straight face is more than awesome.
you have a great speaking voice jacko, one which lifts your poetry to the highest of levels.

the gap between continue and unmoved feels a little strained but it is really only a nit and most others will prob like it as is.

well done.

[billy]

(content) is enough of a warning jack

[heslopian]

Thanks Bilbo, and yeah, it does seem strained at the end. I find I read best when I'm not concentrating on dramatic effect.

[billy]

you're ten times better than i could ever be

[heslopian]

Well there's no way for me to gauge that until you post a video

[billy]

i'll give it a go when i get back home i said