"Stunning night."

[Ris Yerg]

The starry sky,
Like a black-silver fleece,
Covered the earth.
I admire it in a dumb admiration -
Fleas.
What great fleas must live there!

[addy]

I really liked this one, the silly nonsense in it made me grin and cheered me up immensely. Just needs a little correction. In line four, replace either "admire" or "admiration" because using both in the same line is redundant. Also, I think its grammatically correct to drop the "the" in the last line.

Thanks for the read

[Ris Yerg]

Thank you, Addy!
R.Y.

[billy]

i like the intent behind the lines.
nicely done

[Ris Yerg]

Thank you, Billy!
R.Y.