BAD DAYS BETTER LOVE I-III

[thewilderhen]

my love for you
cools its head
draws a breath
trys again

———-

what I really want to do
driving the way I do
like dust licking the back of the car
building up the way I love you

———-

time passed,
and your love
and yr love
& yr love

[Bunx]

I like the writing alot especially the first two stanzas. I am getting a little lost at the end though, coming from the previous stanza (even though they could be unrelated) I see the message as love fading (or) evolving into something more implicit.
An interesting poem thanks for the read.

[thewilderhen]

Meant to be separate, but as a set. Another addition, perhaps?

thinking
I hummed a song
the same one you
sing when you’re
happy

I’ll let these characters sit for a bit