Rainbow
#1
Rainbow 
A rainbows faint glow
A spectacular show
Where colours flow
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#2
We have a short form forum if you think it will fit better there

https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/forum-58.html

Although I am sure it fine here as well
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#3
(01-27-2026, 02:24 AM)milo Wrote:  We have a short form forum if you think it will fit better there

https://www.pigpenpoetry.com/forum-58.html
I am sure it fine here as well

Maybe next time  Big Grin
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#4
(01-27-2026, 12:03 AM)Smiley Wrote:  A rainbows faint glow
A spectacular show
Where colours flow

While the concept is pretty common and the rhymes could be more complex, it reads very well, balanced.
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#5
This is how i practice, this is how i grow..
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#6
(Yesterday, 02:49 AM)Smiley Wrote:  This is how i practice, this is how i grow..

everyone started somewhere
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#7
(Yesterday, 03:06 AM)milo Wrote:  
(Yesterday, 02:49 AM)Smiley Wrote:  This is how i practice, this is how i grow..

everyone started somewhere

.. somehow  Smile
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#8
For some reason  Big Grin
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