Wednesday's Smile
#1
Wednesday's Smile


Like a root taken out of the ground,
while a mandrake cries, 
squirrels rake and dogs hover
in their equipped sounds,
like the barista who appears at every coffee shop in America.

Digesting from a piss behind a dumpster
disguised as a taking in of the scenery,
a captain and a stooge climb the tall stairs
ramping the old-world ship that rests 
in the harbor for, apparently, looks, and I make my way up.

There she is, like a black flower in a cozy bright dream,
standing by the doorway of the squat, cramped coffer-
shaped shop where the man places miniature ships 
in bottles, as though love were but the first star 
seen at night and an emperor from then on, though sky and time fly.

Escorted down, I hear the sea's silence and feel 
my loins turn to family photo albums the future has
no guarantee of.  I turn and walk west, the end of the world,
as though certain to see her again, without crudely assuming.
What's it been–nearly 20 years? She was freshly some five
years younger, and a face I haven't forgotten though sometimes she was dressed in black and other times in violet.
Reply
#2
As is often the case with @rowen's poetry, I stand in awe of the creativity and images. The third stanza by itself would shine, but it also fits. (I blush a bit concerning the metaphor of the man placing minature ships in bottles - oh, my.) So very good.

Then at the end, "at other times inviolate." Right?
feedback award Non-practicing atheist
Reply
#3
I made another poem:

This poem has no images but is essential.


No Logos


Process Psychology.

Process Philosophy.

Process Magic.

Improvisational Comedy
Reply




Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!