Think like a poet

[HAWK2567]

Think like a poet
Think like a poet
Write like a poet
Pray like a poet do
Dream like a poet do
When you sleep at night
Today is over already
It was my Father that ended
This day
The sun went down already
And I saw the sunset
It was beautiful
Here is the night
The night arrived very fast
It is the poet's bed time
Medicatin already taken
The poet is hoping to have a good night
I know that will be a long night
That my father made for me to sleep
Write like a poet
Pray like a poet do
Think like a poet
Write like a poet
Think like a poet
Write like a poet
Pray like a poet do
Dream like a poet do
When you sleep at night
Today is over already
It was my Father that ended
This day
The sun went down already
And I saw the sunset
It was beautiful
Here is the night
The night arrived very fast
It is the poet's bed time
Medication already taken
The poet is hoping to have a good night
I know that will be a long night
That my father made for me to sleep

Aldo Gabbay Kraas

Pray like a poet do
Dream like a poet do
When you sleep at night
Today is over already
It was my Father that ended
This day
The sun went down already
And I saw the sunset
It was beautiful
Here is the night
The night arrived very fast
It is the poet's bed time
Medication already taken
The poet is hoping to have a good night
I know that will be a long night
That my father made for me to sleep
Dream like a poet do
When you sleep at night
It was my Father that ended
This day
The sun went down already
And I saw the sunset
It was beautiful
Here is the night
The night arrived very fast
It is the poet's bed time
Medication already taken
The poet is hoping to have a good night
I know that will be a long night
That my father made for me to sleep

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I really like this. The simple wording still holds so much to it. It's easy to comprehend yet complex in meaning. I'm especially drawn to the perspective switching occasionally. You're doing great :]