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Genius

Genius
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#1
03-11-2025, 11:45 AM
Genius

I have a zit in the centre of my nose

even my flaws have precision
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#2
03-11-2025, 02:48 PM
removing the 'I have' and adding an em dash after nose would be better, I think.

Signed: a very stable genius.
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#3
03-11-2025, 05:26 PM
I like it. 

I agree with Busker's suggestion.

My spots are like a Monet sunset
feedback award wae aye man ye radgie
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#4
03-12-2025, 06:21 AM
your symmetry remains
unblemished
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#5
03-13-2025, 02:29 AM
Fetish

one man's rash

is another man's pleasure
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