"Physics of love."

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"Physics of love."

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#1

03-13-2011, 12:29 AM

Tormenting and sweet
To be in love with you.
No worry.
Sooner or later it disperses.
Blessed be the entropy.

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Are you alluding to me?

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03-13-2011, 07:23 AM

i really like this, it feels like a perfected
explanation of where love often ends up

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