For eternity

[Pecha]

Please I go easy on me, This my first time writing an English poem.

The softest petal of the flower,
Washes adrift 
Smooth and Gente is the flow
And it floats away adrift.
I chase after it
With hope that I may catch her
And then she looks at me shyly,
As if asking me to hold her.
I extend thy arms
Pray to The one
"O Lord have mercy
For I have fallen for
Most definitely one of your
Best creations that I have seen".
With strength and hope
On the black horse that gallops,
Faster than the rising sun
I take take that petel
Into my chest
while she rests on my arm.
I fix my eyes into her red shy face
And tell her 
That I can't take off my gaze.
She asks "O, my dear do you love me"
I reply "By my Lord, for eternity"

[fawnmossling]

Beautiful poem, that's pretty damn good for your first English one. it feel very 'soft' and gentle

[Bunx]

I love this poem. You could mess with the structure. I love the theme of finding religion within loving someone else. Or at least that is what I think the theme is.

Awesome read thank you.