Dust* by TranquilityBase
#1
Dust

No sense to be made
of this little flower
the color of impending death
importunes
every breath is guess work
arrives no where at all

light warped evenings
take the air at odds and ends
train horns punctuate.
To morning
it’s all beginnings, then day explodes
into identical fragments.

No beginning, middle or end
will satisfy this miller.
He grinds everything to dust.


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#2
Nice work tqb!
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#3
Great job, TqB.  Well deserved!
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#4
Gratified and humbled.

This is a unique village we've got here.  This poem would not be what it is without brynmawr's critique.

TqB
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#5
This is beautiful, the fragments form a lovely whole.
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#6
No beginning, middle or end
will satisfy this miller


Well Tim- I guess existing in an eternal state is hard for us to comprehend.
Good to see a good piece get props. Thumbsup
Mark
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