County Fair
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County Fair

A half dozen 
questionable rides

waffle cones 
and blooming onions

an almost-life-sized-stuffed-giraffe 
that cost $72 at the arcade
and came apart at seams

on the train ride home

he leans in for a kiss--

she's sleeping
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#2
I like the ambiguity about whether she is a lover or a daughter.
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#3
Hey Tiger, this one is lovely.
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#4
TigerL - Every now and then, it’s good to step out of the box to write the different. I like the mystery in this one. Good work TL. Namyh
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