Fuck Nugget

[Kynaston Levitt]

Fuck Nugget 


blood spins with the wheel—

super meat boy forever

dead and dead again

[Tiger the Lion]

Fuck Nugget


blood spins with the wheel—

super meat boy forever

dead and dead again

Googled "super meat boy" more out of duty than intrigue. Should "forever" be in italics? 
Not sure who your intended audience is.

[Kynaston Levitt]

Fuck Nugget


blood spins with the wheel—

super meat boy forever

dead and dead again

Googled "super meat boy" more out of duty than intrigue. Should "forever" be in italics? 
Not sure who your intended audience is.

"Super Meat Boy Forever" is the complete title of the sequel to Super Meat Boy. I thought it would be proper to acknowledge the entire phrase as unoriginal. Although, I agree it would be better without "forever" in italics. Maybe I should've just done that.
As for the intended audience, well, it's primarily me. I needed some catharsis as this game is beginning to slowly unravel my mind.

[brynmawr1]

Fuck Nugget


blood spins with the wheel—

super meat boy forever

dead and dead again

Hey KL,
Once I googled super meat boy it all made sense.  Not much of a gamer anymore but I get the sentiment.  Played a lot of DOOM when it first came out, mostly death match.  One of my friends was a lot better than me.  Would have liked to have yelled, "Fuck Nugget" at him every time he killed me.

Not sure how to let people unfamiliar with the game know 'super meat boy' is a title of something.  Maybe also capitalize and/or in quotes?  I do agree that 'forever' should be in regular font.  Does double duty that way.
later,
bryn

[Kynaston Levitt]

Fuck Nugget


blood spins with the wheel—

super meat boy forever

dead and dead again

Hey KL,
Once I googled super meat boy it all made sense.  Not much of a gamer anymore but I get the sentiment.  Played a lot of DOOM when it first came out, mostly death match.  One of my friends was a lot better than me.  Would have liked to have yelled, "Fuck Nugget" at him every time he killed me.

Not sure how to let people unfamiliar with the game know 'super meat boy' is a title of something.  Maybe also capitalize and/or in quotes?  I do agree that 'forever' should be in regular font.  Does double duty that way.
later,
bryn

Yeah, Doom was super cool back in the day. Me and my friend used to play it on his Amiga 1200! How dated is that? Also, Nugget is the name of Super Meat Boy's baby and he's mission is to save Nugget. So, every time I die for the 1000th time I want to sit in the corner rocking like a mental patient muttering "fuck nugget fuck nugget" to myself.

I took the italics off "forever". It's definitely better that way. But having three capital letters in a row in such a short poem would drive me autistic. I wouldn't be able to sleep at night.

Anyway, thanks.