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Sunset on the back
of a 60 mile line of thunderstorms
turned the atmosphere orange
clouds, trees, flowerbeds, grass
tinted by some cosmic Fleischer.
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This is nice - one knit is I would remove the second 'orange' in the final line, we know the tint is orange from the first mention of the colour.
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(05-01-2023, 03:45 AM)Wjames Wrote: This is nice - one knit is I would remove the second 'orange' in the final line, we know the tint is orange from the first mention of the colour.
Good nit to pick, updated accordingly
