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#1
12-16-2022, 04:37 AM
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It stands
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12-16-2022, 05:55 AM
(12-16-2022, 04:37 AM)Semicircle Wrote:  It stands
Once I decided not to dismiss this as a piss take, I quickly grew to appreciate it. Though I think it would be better served with a cleaned up appearance...

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*** of course, that's just me. I always prefer when members post their titles with the body of the poem. The "Post Subject" field is really meant as a placeholder.
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12-17-2022, 12:07 AM
Thanks TG,
I'll do that from now on.
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but the cat came back the very next day
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12-22-2022, 03:41 PM
Wow, pretty good, I love the straight-forwardness of the poem. Good job.
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