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One Brother to Another
No desires
to wither away.
I will willingly ascend
with eyes wide open.
Share in my thoughts
of well being.
My presence
will always remain.
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Hey. I hope you and your brother comfort. His thoughts have impact, I'm glad you've shared them. I can only offer a bit of kindness, hope that's enough.
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(09-13-2022, 08:28 AM)Semicircle Wrote: Hey. I hope you and your brother comfort. His thoughts have impact, I'm glad you've shared them. I can only offer a bit of kindness, hope that's enough.
Thank you,
A bit of kindness goes a long way, my friend, and that is plenty enough.
Funny, that on a poetry forum in the middle of this internet ocean, where I don’t really know anyone, I can still feel the genuineness of your sentiment. I do appreciate it, too.
Sincerely,
Mark
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Thinking of him and you, Mark. It's lovely that you are brothers in poetry as well.
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(09-13-2022, 06:55 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: One Brother to Another
No desires
to wither away.
I will willingly ascend
with eyes wide open.
Share in my thoughts
of well being.
My presence
will always remain.
Brothers in poetry, as Lizzie said. Thanks for sharing.
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Mark,
My thoughts go out to both of you. It's a remarkable text. I hope I am that brave and aware of others when my time comes.
Tim
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Semi, Lizzie, busker, and Tim,
My thanks to you all,
Mark
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Hi Mark,
I just wanted to add my sympathies for you and your family. Thank you for sharing your brother's words with us and I am glad that you might get some solace from that. It is interesting how basing a relationship on honesty and respect can make even distant friendships rewarding.
All the best,
steve
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(09-14-2022, 05:33 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote: Hi Mark,
I just wanted to add my sympathies for you and your family. Thank you for sharing your brother's words with us and I am glad that you might get some solace from that. It is interesting how basing a relationship on honesty and respect can make even distant friendships rewarding.
All the best,
steve
Thank you Steve-
Mark
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7 brothers, like 7 candles on a cake
being blown out, one by one:
RIP, my brother,
your presence will always remain
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(09-22-2022, 09:53 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: 7 brothers, like 7 candles on a cake
being blown out, one by one:
RIP, my brother,
your presence will always remain
So sorry.
steve