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"Too much beauty."

"Too much beauty."
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#1
02-25-2011, 12:16 AM
I admire.
A young woman
Walks -
Her thighs dance.
I screw up my eyes.
A lady Life
Walks -
Her thighs dance
Too.
But they,
For some reason,
Are naked.

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#2
02-25-2011, 05:20 AM
sorry Ris.

i'm struggling a little with the syntax of the poem.

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02-25-2011, 04:36 PM
Billy!
Be strong! I'm sure you'll win!
R.Y.
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02-25-2011, 04:55 PM
afraid not this time hehe

it got the better of me
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#5
02-25-2011, 05:05 PM
Okay, Billy!
It's not a rush hour, Ha-ha!
R.Y.
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