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"An irony."

"An irony."
Ris Yerg Offline
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#1
02-14-2011, 03:14 PM
A reflection
Of the sun
On a wall
Was beheaded
By a curtain
Hanged
On a window.

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billy Offline
Are you alluding to me?
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#2
02-15-2011, 10:53 AM
the irony of it Smile
great image RY
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addy Offline
The Dog's Bollocks.
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#3
02-15-2011, 01:48 PM
(02-14-2011, 03:14 PM)Ris Yerg Wrote:  A reflection
Of the sun
On a wall
Was beheaded
By a curtain
Hanged
On a window.
Not sure if it is technically ironic (I suck with the fineries of literary forms LOL) but I love this one. One of my faves Smile
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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#4
02-15-2011, 03:45 PM
Thanks, guys!
R.Y.
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#5
02-16-2011, 01:44 AM
the word 'beheaded' shows
how imaginative you are!
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