SC's daily poetry
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Tiger suggested I make my own thread for all my loose-leaf poetry. I mainly want to post them here so I don't forget them. If any turn out to be good, I might move em' to get a critique, but this'll be my new base of operations now.

Thank me later. Thumbsup


The Wrong Medication

Numb tingling
in a bloodless body,
writhing and gasping,
lapping up frigid air.

Green eye buds from the darkness
staring down at me,
but before it can finish
the door opens.




Young Innocence 

She caught the butterfly
and didn't know what to do after;
wings torn and flailing madly.

She plucked it from the net
and ran over to the creek,
behind the house,
chucking it into the water.




Love's gaze

Driven to stare
in time's stasis
watching you
tie your laces



It seems today, that all you see, is violence in movies and sex on tv



White people problems (inspired by rowens)

In a world where black men 
held white men as slaves
it's unfortunate to know
that black men were still cooler.


Tsetse the fly

Tsetse tsetse
putting children to sleep

Tsetse tsetse
into their dreams she creeps

Tsetse tsetse
hyper then sobre

then coma, 
her spawn takes over



Souvenir

I'm trapped in their gaze
but with a blink
they're gone-
still lingering.

They lean in for a kiss;
I give.

I won't see them in the morning,
but they'll be with me every night,
dangling from the mobile of women
that lull me to sleep.



Revelation smoothy

Ambrosia ripe on my corneas,
reaching out to pick it-
I pull out my eyes.

Revelation flowing forth
leaving behind a gash,
partially filled back up
by my pitcher of 
remaining ambrosia.

The revelation persisting after,
but not for long.



(no title)

yellow eyes
on the roof
--black cat

caterwauling
blood trail
--daughter gone

in the fence
caught fur
- turns its head


Eternal bliss

On the knotted beach 
castles built
smoothed over 
into glass,
thin water
swept sea foam
into ribcages,
and the misty white sun
stretched out like an eye
draining all color
from the world.



Family dispersion

The land of the lost and lonely
was home to all rejects,
but some couldn't fit in.
They created their own lands,
and somewhere down the line
we all ended up alone again.
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#2
I'm suspicious
there's only 1 typo
and it might not even be a typo,
you might have just slipped into Spanish.
You are the other half to the semicircle that we know.
Bring him back or there will be serious consequences indeed.

Also, should this be in fun or misc. or members only. It's good poetry, just not funny ha ha like what should be in the fun forum


Hang on a minute.
"DAILY" poetry
Where's that suicide thread?
feedback award wae aye man ye radgie
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(05-17-2022, 01:59 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote:  I'm suspicious
there's only 1 typo
and it might not even be a typo,
you might have just slipped into Spanish.
You are the other half to the semicircle that we know.
Bring him back or there will be serious consequences indeed.

Also, should this be in fun or misc. or members only. It's good poetry, just not funny ha ha like what should be in the fun forum


Hang on a minute.
"DAILY" poetry
Where's that suicide thread?

What can I say? I love raising awareness for suicide prevention. A natural paragon you'd call me.

Don't worry about my twin, I'll deal with him shortly.

I might move the thread ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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