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"Measurement."

"Measurement."
Ris Yerg Offline
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#1
02-14-2011, 06:45 PM
The scientists
Argue:
How long is
The eternity? -
The old impotents
And prats -
Get marry!
And
Mother-in-law
Visits
Would explain
You:
How long
The eternity
Lasts!
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billy Offline
Are you alluding to me?
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#2
02-14-2011, 06:57 PM
would married work better Ris?
and is the first 'the' needed?

i really like it. the cross over from scientist to mother in law
works well. thanks for the smile, and the read
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addy Offline
The Dog's Bollocks.
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#3
02-15-2011, 01:51 PM
A few rough spots on the grammar, but still a clever piece of work Big Grin
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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#4
02-15-2011, 03:43 PM
Ha!
Do you believe I can write about those visits in right grammar?! I'll be damned if I do!
R.Y.

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#5
02-16-2011, 01:46 AM
yes, those visits could feel like eternity
but don't tell my ex mother-in-law i said that! Wink
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