If I only...

[LiteraryAntiquity]

If I only knew
how to bare my soul before you.
If I only thought
about my actions before they became actions.
If I only loved
the mirror image that is before me.
If I only knew
how to bare my soul before you.

[billy]

it reads well and feels right to the senses
though it also feels hall-marky
for me it needs at least one image possibly two
thanks for the read LA

[Ris Yerg]

Hi!
I like it!
Great short poem with real sense and feelings!
Thanks!

[addy]

I liked this. It's an easy read, but with something intriguing under the surface