God's art
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Fingers of a marionette;
pen in one hand, trying to remember.
Stroke begins to taper.

Arching around
making a striation
with burns and tears
sprouted of his nightmares.

The finished result
is a monstrosity
but perhaps most of all;
those marionette hands
that created him. 

After, he reclines to the depths
drifting sleeplessly in an abyss.
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(11-01-2021, 01:48 AM)Kerbonzo_beenz Wrote:  Fingers of a marionette
stretch down to a slice of paper.
Pen in one hand, trying to remember.
Stroke begins to taper.

Arching around
making a striation on the outside
with burns and tears;
sprouted of his nightmares.

The finished result
is a monstrosity
but perhaps most of all
is those marionette hands
that created him. 

After, he reclines to the depths
the work he done: taxing;
drifting sleeplessly in an abyss
no time for relaxing.

Hi KB,

Like the marionette hand of god.  Some suggested cuts, just my way to focusing in on the parts I like the best.

TqB
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