Humdinger

[Kerbonzo_beenz]

Like thin paper doused in hot vaper.
Wispy strands running under the skin.
A gaunt torso that ends with a taper.
Tail ending with a fin.
Bulging milky eyes like black speckle skies.
A torpedo shooting under the water.
There is only one to exist now.
Others of it's kind it did slaughter.
Lurking in the Mariana Trench.
Seven miles down below.
Where it feeds on sea pigs.
And gradually it grows.
It's as charming as a mudskipper.
It's as cunning as an eel.
Granting wishes to humans.
In exchange for a banana peel.

[CRNDLSM]

Is there a reason every line has a capital letter to start the line except for L12? And periods? Is a humdinger a difficult question?

[Kerbonzo_beenz]

There wasn't no, I fixed it though. A humdinger is a remarkable or outstanding person or thing of its kind.

[Tiger the Lion]

Could be improved.

[Kerbonzo_beenz]

Could be improved.

What could I do to improve my work?

[Tiger the Lion]

Could be improved.

What could I do to improve my work?

That we be a discussion more appropriate to the critical threads.