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"Trained eye."

"Trained eye."
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#1
02-02-2011, 05:34 PM
A pool and a stone -
That's all what I need
So as to break the moon.

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#2
02-03-2011, 11:34 AM
excellent

a great image in a few words.
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#3
02-03-2011, 04:27 PM
Thank you, Billy!
R.Y.
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