"Arrival."

[Ris Yerg]

A black birds flock
Is circling above a city.
One after the other
They are flying away.
Each one with a piece
Of a dying day ...
A still-born night's
Arrival.

[billy]

i like this a lot.

One after the another should it read as one after the other
or maybe one after another?

it has a lot of imagery for such a small piece.

thanks for the read Ris

[Ris Yerg]

Hi!
Thank you Billy for kind comment!
Yes, you are right! "One after the other" of course.
Sorry, my night's shift plays trick on me - tired ...
Best regards, R.Y.

[addy]

Oh, I love this one. There's something unconsciously melodic about it. Very nice.

[Ris Yerg]

Thanks, Addy!
R.Y.