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#1
Drunk tightrope walker,
stumbling over bruised feet;
and ground he will meet
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#2
Like the image presented here in this senryu and that's what these short poems are about, good images.
I think the first line says it all

tightrope walker
-- drunk

but don't listen too me i'm ridiculously minimalist

cheers

Mark
feedback award wae aye man ye radgie
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