Hi all, my first post, something fun

[keith.denham@live.co.uk]

A horse has four legs, of course
A person only has two
That's why a horse, of course
Can run much faster than you

[dukealien]

A horse has four legs, of course
A person only has two
That's why a horse, of course
Can run much faster than you

Welcome, Keith D. (or Denham K., never know when it's last-name-first).

But can a horse always jump higher than a ewe?  (And, as horses found to their sorrow, a horse can't run as long or, consequently, as far as two-legged you.  If you're in good shape, anyway.)

Do critique a few
then post in one of the forums here
where we can critique help ewe you!

[philip]

Hello keith.denham@live.co.uk,

is that one of those new-fangled interweb addresses - shameless self-promotion...

A nice shorty to critique, that has solid rhymes and in-rhymes making for a pleasant read.

But it falls down on the logic of course, as Brian my tortoise would attest!

Find a universal insight to wow the readers.....................P