"Two beauties."

[Ris Yerg]

Night.
Winter.
Silver world.
A birch tree -
With a last leaf
On its branches
Hides naked moon
From curious glances -
Forgot, innocently,
Its own nakedness
And beauty.

[heslopian]

I like the stripped down, imagistic style of this piece; it reminds me of William Carlos Williams. Thank you for the read, Ris Yerg.

[billy]

Night.
Winter.
Silver world.
A birch tree -
With a last leaf
On its branches
Hides naked moon
From curious glances -
Forgot, innocently,
Its own nakedness
And beauty.

nice minimalistic piece, it has a Japanese quality about it.
thanks for the read.

[Ris Yerg]

I like the stripped down, imagistic style of this piece; it reminds me of William Carlos Williams. Thank you for the read, Ris Yerg.

Thank you so much for your kind comment!
R.Y.

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Night.
Winter.
Silver world.
A birch tree -
With a last leaf
On its branches
Hides naked moon
From curious glances -
Forgot, innocently,
Its own nakedness
And beauty.

nice minimalistic piece, it has a Japanese quality about it.
thanks for the read.

Thank you, Billy!
Yes, I like minimalism! And if it reminds you Japanese stile - I'm happy! I like Japanese poetry!

[billy]

Thank you, Billy!
Yes, I like minimalism! And if it reminds you Japanese stile - I'm happy! I like Japanese poetry!

there's some japanese poetry at this link, there's also some Basho on the same site.