Ennui (A Cinquain)

[heslopian]

Ennui
Sidewalks leading nowhere
He passes shops and bus stations
Always moving but never reaching
Vaccum

[billy]

i like it
it's as vacant as the title (that's a compliment )

i have to have breakfast and go out but i'll def drop some poetry in later, i've been a little remiss these past few days
thanks for the read jack

[heslopian]

i like it
it's as vacant as the title (that's a compliment )

i have to have breakfast and go out but i'll def drop some poetry in later, i've been a little remiss these past few days
thanks for the read jack

Thank you for the kind words Billy, and I look forward to reading your next poem

[Ris Yerg]

Clever and thought provoking!
Enjoyed.

[heslopian]

Thank you Ris Yerg