The days
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The days

If you ask me of what I have done,
how I have prepared the path for you,
it was just trains, trams, city buses,
the day to day,
each day a leaf shed from the tree of life

for you, my joy, the sum all of my selves:
may your days be endless trees.
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#2
my reaction in real time to each sentence:

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I like the title!!
assholery not intended .
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#3
Yeah, it needs work. The conclusion doesn't make a lot of sense at the moment.
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