Thy Neighbour

[Tiger the Lion]

Thy Neighbour

Louis next door is an ass.

He's got his boys over
shot-gunning beers
belching 
spitting,
talking shit 
and pissing off the fucking porch.

From my bedroom we can see 
their little peckers under the swag 
of plastic tiki lamps
like it's a low-budget reality show.

We pop corn and binge-watch
till the party's over,
his wife and I.

[billy]

hehe, good twist. if i were giving feedback i'd say don't do an edit.

[dukealien]

Wicked good. (g)


Edit: Wicked good. (X)

[busker]

Nice ending. Makes L1 funny even.

[ISawASpaceship]

Thy Neighbour

Louis next door is an ass.

He's got his boys over
shot-gunning beers
belching 
spitting,
talking shit 
and pissing off the fucking porch.

From my bedroom we can see 
their little peckers under the swag 
of plastic tiki lamps
like it's a low-budget reality show.

We pop corn and binge-watch
till the party's over,
his wife and I.

Harsh. That last line, though. Oof