06-06-2018, 05:57 AM
I am very new to this and not very good at criticism.
I really enjoy how through each stanza you describe what you hear when you try to understand the language of the mountain. The stanzas feel like it moves from winter to spring and then summer. I could imagine myself in the mountains as the seasons passed. With each season it feels like someone new is trying to communicate. Just another side of the mountain you didn’t see before.
I really enjoy how through each stanza you describe what you hear when you try to understand the language of the mountain. The stanzas feel like it moves from winter to spring and then summer. I could imagine myself in the mountains as the seasons passed. With each season it feels like someone new is trying to communicate. Just another side of the mountain you didn’t see before.