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Rising up, feeling the heat
took her out, took my chances
went the distance, now I’m back on my feet
just a man and his will to survive
 
Sometimes it seems that it’s over too fast
(well that’s ok, man, it happens)
just remember, what’s important will last:
the result of your sexual drive
 
It’s the eye of the penis
at the tip of the glans
rising up for our DNA’s survival
when the code of your genes
becomes the start of a child
from the testes and out through the eye
of the penis
 
It’s a gift, don’t mess it up
it’s a three-person story
you and her and the baby you’ve made
you must fight just to keep it alive
 
It’s your two-minute pleasure
that has turned into life
watch it grow up and become a new person
it’s your job now
you can’t just pull out
once you’re done and it’s come through the eye
of the penis
It could be worse
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Hysterical Hysterical Brilliant, if your going to do a parody,do it proper, job done. You know if you YouTube this its link will appear on every poetry forum.

I think you did every verse, Hysterical

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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