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#1
Like clothes through wind,
they roll in slow motion
and almost never end.
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#2
Provokes some thought: though every drying cycle ends, it almost never does... that is, no particular tumble is likely to be the last. (Are Achilles and the tortoise in that dryer? And which is ahead?)
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#3
(10-31-2017, 05:28 AM)Youi Wrote:  Like clothes through wind,
they roll in slow motion
and almost never end.

i agree. it does provoke thought and now i'm wondering about tortoise and spike.
or what description and what does this describe. 

good work.
In your own, each bone comes alive
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve....

(Chris Martin)
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#4
It's amazing that the one, short poem I didn't put much thought into seems to be the most thought-provoking.
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