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Death Poem

Death Poem
dukealien Offline
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#1
10-24-2017, 10:42 AM
Untitled (Death Poem)


My last cookie was
sweeter than any other
except for this next.


Just this, then I'll go dark for a bit... though not, one hopes, to make this the real deal.
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#2
10-24-2017, 11:18 AM
I like the circularity, come back soon.
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Wjames Offline
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#3
10-24-2017, 11:28 AM
I can only hope that death is as sweet as a peanut butter chocolate chip cookie.
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