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05-23-2017, 09:18 AM
God
 
God got himself tied up in nots.
Someone lured him into Schrödinger's box,
with a plate full of bagels and lox.
"Is it really dark in here, or am I going blind,
or do I have humans too much in my mind.
Oy Vey!" "I am says I...i would not tell a lie."
 
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05-23-2017, 11:00 AM
Big Grin Killer first line.
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05-23-2017, 11:18 AM
Schrödinger's god
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05-23-2017, 11:32 AM
OMG it's the God of the archaic desert tribe! Oy Vey! Though I guess that makes sense, as Schrodinger was Jewish. So was Niels Bohr.
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05-24-2017, 01:46 AM
El " Killer first line." Inspired by a box of doughnuts!

Billy "Schrödinger's god" figuratively and literally!

JM "Oy Vey!" That's what I say Smile (To paraphrase Carlos Santana)


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How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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