Pro Verbial
#1
Pro Verbial

Godlessness remains
Godlessness
whether God remains
or not.

It is what it is
If He Is that He Is

and it is what it is
if He's naught.
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#2
This is a delightful read -- one that demands the reader slow down and revisit.  My second read was double-take, and subsequent readings were squeezing more juice out. Even now I'm not sure I've caught it all.  So I don't yet have anything in the way of specific critique.  I just wanted to give you the encouragement of my first reaction.
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