The Alley Ends

[CRNDLSM]

The Alley Ends 

with over run-
ning vines and loose debris from dec-
ades of decay and redirec-
ting energy sent, From the sun

and circling sky in-
habitants shift with the rains a-
bandoning their hunger pains, a-
nother day to stay Is dyin'

though the final voy-
age? Hind sight's just as blind as fore-
sight.  Calculating ancient stor-
age, El Dorado's, Even Troy's

ruins had been un-
earthed, revealing nothing extra-
ordinary.  In context, tra-
dition's are scholar's Opinions

sway, cultural lend-
ers walk the streets, between the buil-
dings.  Leave their thoughts with broken pill-
ars as they reach The alley's end.

[Brownlie]

The Alley Ends 

with over run-
ning vines and loose debris from dec-
ades of decay and redirec-
ting energy sent, From the sun

and circling sky in-
habitants shift with the rains a-
bandoning their hunger pains, a-
nother says, 'to stay Is dyin''

though the final voy-
age? Hind sight's just as blind as fore-
sight.  Calculating ancient stor-
age, El Dorado's, Even Troy's

ruins had been un-
dition's are scholar's Opinions 

sway, cultural lend-
earthed, revealing nothing extra-
ordinary.  In context, tra-
ers walk the streets, between the buil-
dings.  Leave their thoughts with broken pill-
ars as they reach The alley's end.

I'm thinking the enjambment stuff is supposed to be a confusing alley.

[CRNDLSM]

I didn't want to be too subtle...
Being annoying can be pretty fun lol

[Brownlie]

I didn't want to be too subtle...
Being annoying can be pretty fun lol

Hey, sometimes you need to procrastinate or kill time. Why not post some experimental stuff for fun.

[Lizzie]

I like how the rhymes are more embedded and subtle.

Reads well for me.

Yay, Crundle!