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       All the felled trees        
for the lines on this page.
       Burn this poem,        
rake the ash 
into 
the 
soil,
compost all your food waste at the bottom,
and plant a poetry.
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#2
Ha, nice, It's rare I write on paper anymore but I sure do read it.
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#3
Well done. I bet this could be huge and even shape a giant tree if you wanted.
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#4
@ella - I find when carpel tunnel sets in from typing, an old fashioned ball point is nice relief

@crndlsm - thanks for the idea. now to find a print shop...
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#5
A poetry.....very clever. Thumbsup
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#6
ooh, concrete. would prefer "language", but "plant a poetry" still works ----- but now i'll reimagine this as smut. easy enough, although i'm not sure if Onanism is really that effective. anyways, lovely, even if the first sentence is a fragment (maybe em dash? but that would ruin the Opsis)
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#7
The tree shape of this poem made it for me, I almost didn't even notice. Super clever, and who doesn't love a good poetry.
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