Pluck

[kolemath]

If I didn't love you,
your blue eyes wouldn't be so beautiful
on a soggy paper plate.

[Bueller]

If I didn't love you,
your blue eyes wouldn't be so beautiful
on a soggy paper plate.

Very Hannibal the Cannibal.

Although, I don't imagine he ever used paper plates.

[kolemath]

ah, yes. perhaps fine china would be more appetizing

[RiverNotch]

If I didn't love you,
your blue eyes wouldn't be so beautiful
on a soggy paper plate.

I dunno....I don't really like the double negative, "so beautiful" feels like a descriptive flat line, and the last two lines read too long.

[kolemath]

Thanks for commenting, river. 575 getting in the wordy way

[RiverNotch]

Thanks for commenting, river. 575 getting in the wordy way

Isn't it more 6-10-7?

[kolemath]

Thanks for commenting, river. 575 getting in the wordy way

Isn't it more 6-10-7?

yeah i guess it all depends on dialect  or counting words instead of syllables brainfarting