Mast Tragedy
#1
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Mast Tragedy

The loss of
a raised flag
at full mast.
#2
Brilliant second and third lines but abstraction of the first weakens the reading..

Kudos to timeliness
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#3
(07-27-2016, 11:45 AM)kolemath Wrote:  Brilliant second and third lines but  abstraction of the first weakens the reading..

Kudos to timeliness
Now I'm wondering whose is rarer, France's or America's?
http://www.bbc.com/news/world-europe-36892785
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I made an adjustment.




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