Rock Your World (song lyrics)
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These are song lyrics, I'm just posting them here for cheap copyright protection. It is sung to a boogie-woogie. This of course doesn't restrict comments in anyway.    dale


Rock Your World

 
You know she’s got it, she knows it is as well,
she will give some to you, but the price is hell,
She’ll take your car, take your house too,
Your feeling the urge, now what can you do?
Just say no, say no to that girl,
You better be careful, or she’ll rock your world.
 
She’s a high priced lady, she’s tall and lean,
She can be tender, she can be so mean,
Just like Bette Davis she’ll strike a pose,
She’s the Devil incarnate in panty hose,
Just say no, say no to that girl,
You better be careful, or she’ll rock your world.
 
There’s been many a guy, gone down that street,
Chasing that pussy, like a dog in heat,
Chased her ‘til she caught’em, then she wouldn’t let go,
You better watch out, you reap what you sow.
Just say no, say no to that girl,
You better be careful, or she’ll rock your world.
 
Now you just might think, you can beat her game,
But she’s a wild she-devil, she won’t be tamed,
If you’ll listen up son, I’ll give you some advise,
Run like hell and don’t think twice.
Just say no, say no to that girl,
You better be careful, or she’ll rock your world.
 
DB Tisdale
 
©1989-2016


How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

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#2
A few nits Smile

I'd like "she's a high priced lady"

Bette Davis, who's she? Wink I was thinking a Kardash but then thought Madonna strikes a pose, sort of halfway between in time, I still think someone more current would be better, maybe a non-kardash model.

S3L4 sow instead of so.

That was fun.
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ellamybowlfullofjella,

"a" & "sow"/fixed, thanks for the catch. As to "Bette Davis" there's no bitch better, those other two sluts don't hold a candle to her. If people don't know who she is, it's their loss.   HystericalThis is a great bar song, but who in a bar is going to care about if they know who  Bette Davis is? Plus the lyrics go by pretty fast. Sides the tempos around quarter note=96, but it is really the eight note that get the beat so the tempo seems much faster than that.

Thanks,

dale
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(07-21-2016, 06:54 AM)ellajam Wrote:  A few nits Smile

I'd like "she's a high priced lady"

Bette Davis, who's she? Wink I was thinking a Kardash but then thought Madonna strikes a pose, sort of halfway between in time, I still think someone more current would be better, maybe a non-kardash model.

S3L4 sow instead of so.

That was fun.
Yes, a fun song.

---oh you know, Bette Davis, from All About Eve! with, er, Marilyn Monroe!

or, fine, the girl from this song:

not the singer, the --- fine, how about this passing mention:
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#5
"Happy Birthday Mister President!"
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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#6
Here are some " classic" rock lyrics. Nothing like chasing some Pussy around to reaffirm the old stereotype about metal heads and their obsession with lose women wearing tight clothes. If only you could've somehow worked a Camaro into the piece. Well done and rock on!
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starzzandstrapzz,

Thanks for your comments. I did write "She’ll take your car", not everyone can be so lucky as to drive a Camaro! Big Grin


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dale
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