Be A Stranger To Me
#1
I'm not asking for comments on this. These are the lyrics for a song. My daughter has started playing music and I have been writing some songs for her. I am just putting this here for some copy write protection. The music is slow jazz. dale


Be A Stranger To Me
 
Be a stranger to me,
like they said just let it be,
let it fly to the sky;
deeper than the oceans or the sea,
when you're a stranger to me.
ooh be a stranger to me
aah be a stranger to me

 
 
 
I have been hurt before,
yea, maybe that's true,
but I could never be hurt by you,
so, do anything you want to do,
only be a stranger to me.
ooh be a stranger to me
aah be a stranger to me

 
 
Only like this can we be free,
it's what I mean by let it be,
I won't know when you've left
or when if you've come back to me
if, you're a stranger to me.
ooh be a stranger to me
aah be a stranger to me

 
©2016 db tisdale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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#2
Wow. Be a stranger to me.
(with some oh yeah and aah:-))
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#3
Shakeeb Ahmad wrote: "Wow. Be a stranger to me.
(with some oh yeah and aah:-))"

Yeah, it does look silly on paper, but that is how the vocalization goes. It's Jazz, what can I say. I pared it down so it would look not quite so silly.

Thanks for the comment.

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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#4
Only like this can we be free,
it's what I mean by let it be,
I won't know when you've left
or when if you've come back to me
if, you're a stranger to me.
ooh be a stranger to me
aah be a stranger to me
^^^^
My favorite lines. Very logical yet completes the emotion of the poem. Loving the emotion from this! Its deep but direct. Submissive yet proud. Thank you for your share!
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#5
Thanks I appreciate that. BTW, great logo.

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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