06-10-2016, 09:38 PM
Walking on thin ice
nothing is
everything might be
nothing is
everything might be
- the partially blind semi bald eagle
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For Ella
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06-10-2016, 09:38 PM
Walking on thin ice
nothing is everything might be
06-10-2016, 10:03 PM
ain't no such thing as solid ground.
billy wrote:welcome to the site. make it your own, wear it like a well loved slipper and wear it out. ella pleads:please click forum titles for posting guidelines, important threads. New poet? Try Poetic DevicesandWard's Tips
06-13-2016, 03:50 AM
might be nothing is everything
![]() dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
06-13-2016, 02:23 PM
hi sj, ella's always on thin ice, she likes it that way.
06-14-2016, 12:23 AM
and then to think I made a serious haiku attempt
oh well
06-14-2016, 12:38 AM
It's a sound poem even though we're babbling. Walking on thin ice is a cliche, you might think of a new way to say it, but the whole of it is thought provoking.
billy wrote:welcome to the site. make it your own, wear it like a well loved slipper and wear it out. ella pleads:please click forum titles for posting guidelines, important threads. New poet? Try Poetic DevicesandWard's Tips
06-15-2016, 12:07 AM
o.k.
will think about another line
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