Love Note
#1
I love you very much
even though we've never met
and if you were mine

we'd live in a house
where the back garden grass
is long and unkempt

so as to disguise
our love bunny games
in the sun.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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#2
it's one of those pleasant poems that make a person smile.
tinged with a bit of hope.
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#3
Thanks BillySmile The poem was sort of inspired by This Is Just To Say by William Carlos Williams, a simple imagistic poem with similar typography in each stanza. I think I published it on the great poets thread.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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