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NaPM April 09 2016
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04-12-2016, 07:56 AM
one of you best poems leanne. people are often not what we see on first second or third glance but products of fucked up environments. i'm glad it's here in this forum because to do a break down critique of it would only diminish it into lines of text. i see lots of people i know/knew in it; loved it.
04-12-2016, 08:13 AM
(04-12-2016, 07:56 AM)billy Wrote: one of you best poems leanne. people are often not what we see on first second or third glance but products of fucked up environments. i'm glad it's here in this forum because to do a break down critique of it would only diminish it into lines of text. i see lots of people i know/knew in it; loved it. Me too, it made me go quiet, sit and think, a great poem Leanne. If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out |
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